Re: [tdf-discuss] Re: Forums - A Different Question

On Thu, Apr 28, 2011 at 9:50 AM, Marc Paré <marc@marcpare.com> wrote:
> Hi Carl
>
> Le 28/04/11 11:22 AM, Carl Symons a écrit :
> > > "You can get support for LibreOffice from various independent forums run
> > > by
> > > LibreOffice and OpenOffice.org users and supporters. These forums are
> > > more
> > > mature and heavily trafficked and offer quality support to the
> > > LibreOffice
> > > project. LibreOffice does not offer an official forums board at this
> > > time.
> > > An official forums board is still under consideration."
> > >
> > > Does this sound more informative?
> > >
> > > Cheers
> > >
> > > Marc
> >
> > Yes, now only one issue... "more mature" is comparative, but there is
> > no comparison present. (Well, one is implied.) I'd change this
> > sentence to:
> > These forums are mature and heavily trafficked. They offer quality
> > support for LibreOffice, and can be found by searching online.
> >
> > Carl
>
> So this newer version:
>
> "You can get support for LibreOffice from various independent forums run by
> LibreOffice and OpenOffice.org users and supporters. These forums are mature
> and heavily trafficked. They offer quality support to LibreOffice and can be
> found by searching online. LibreOffice does not offer an official forums
> board at this time. An official forums board is still under consideration."
>
> I am not quite sure what is the significance of the "and can be found by
> searching online". Remember, the reader is already on the LibreOffice
> website page "getting help" page.[1] I am not sure if it needs this part of
> the sentence as it is ambiguous.
>
> Cheers
>
> Marc

I'm fine if it's not there. Overly obsessive, but I'll work on getting
over it B^)

Carl

> [1] http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/
>
>
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