[tdf-discuss] Re: Forums - A Different Question

Hi Carl

Le 28/04/11 11:22 AM, Carl Symons a écrit :
> > "You can get support for LibreOffice from various independent forums run by
> > LibreOffice and OpenOffice.org users and supporters. These forums are more
> > mature and heavily trafficked and offer quality support to the LibreOffice
> > project. LibreOffice does not offer an official forums board at this time.
> > An official forums board is still under consideration."
> >
> > Does this sound more informative?
> >
> > Cheers
> >
> > Marc
>
> Yes, now only one issue... "more mature" is comparative, but there is
> no comparison present. (Well, one is implied.) I'd change this
> sentence to:
> These forums are mature and heavily trafficked. They offer quality
> support for LibreOffice, and can be found by searching online.
>
> Carl

So this newer version:

"You can get support for LibreOffice from various independent forums run 
by LibreOffice and OpenOffice.org users and supporters. These forums are 
mature and heavily trafficked. They offer quality support to LibreOffice 
and can be found by searching online. LibreOffice does not offer an 
official forums board at this time. An official forums board is still 
under consideration."

I am not quite sure what is the significance of the "and can be found by 
searching online". Remember, the reader is already on the LibreOffice 
website page "getting help" page.[1] I am not sure if it needs this part 
of the sentence as it is ambiguous.

Cheers

Marc

[1] http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/


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